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The clouds so dark do hide the sun
And the earth is cool and sad
The shadows upon the land shall run
Heavy hearts in sorrow clad

Yet in the saddened shadows bring
The pure and cleansing rain
Quench the seeds from which life springs
And wash away old pains

The stone who boasts that shabby shade
Who is calloused, cold, and dead
Whose ugly face by violence made
Fills many hearts with dread

But you weather well the force of time
To which all others bend
And those who dare delve deeper find
That beauty lies within

Alas, my color, my brightest star
No wonder you do not shine
Few else can see who you truly are
Few else have eyes like mine

Despite your dark, I see your light
I care not for your murky past
Between the extremists black and white
You are my fellow outcast
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This is my response to one of our recent prompts in :iconunabashed-words: which called for the description of the author's favorite color. After much due consideration, I came to the realization that I did not truly know my favorite color :XD: So I thought... and I thought... then I slept, snored, awoke the next day, and thought some more. And finally I came to this realization: the color that one loves the most most likely is the color that corresponds to who they are. And so I looked at my self and tried as best I could to unravel that twisted mystery.

And so, after a couple of days of endless brainstorming, I finally found my color; and it is without a moments hesitation or any feeling of regret that I proudly embrace the color grey as my own (just in case any of you were still wondering what color this piece describes :XD:).

Thanks to Oleander, leader of Unabashed Words, for the prompt and encouragement in the development of this piece :#1:. And thanks to anyone considerate enough to provide any constructive criticism towards my works :D.

Do enjoy it!

The Color Within © Me
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~FlippantMiki Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE! Love! love!

Love this!
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~Krypson Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah, grey is soo awesome, I agree!!! :XD:
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~FlippantMiki Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D One question, are you from Texas?
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~Krypson Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No...uhh, no I am not..., why?
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~FlippantMiki Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you, say ya'll alot, and I live in Texas, I just thought I'd ask, I'm a very curious soul. Not to mention fearless.
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~Krypson Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I lived in the southeast quite a bit, mostly Alabama, then was raised in the Pacific countryside the rest of my life. I sort of acquired the taste for the dialect, you might say. :D
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~FlippantMiki Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, it is a wonderful dialect, isn't it? So easy to speak and understand not to mention how unique it is compared to that of others.
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~Krypson Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, agreed!! :D
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:iconliedy:
Oooh I like this! The last two segments are ****ing amazing! Brilliant work dude.
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~Krypson Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww :D Thank you a ton! I am very happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feed back. ;) I really needed that.
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